句子运用了平行结构和鲜明的比喻（candy vs. scar），对比强烈，修辞手法丰富，虽然稍长但极具画面感。
A clean and tidy heart makes those who dwell within feel comfortable. Adults may find the wind troublesome, worrying about messy hair or the cold, while children find joy in it, watching their little pinwheels spin or preparing to fly kites. Do not be a boring person, do not make decisions while angry, and do not eat things that are bad for your body. If I were not so stubborn, I would tell everyone who cares about me how exhausted I am. Rather than striving for a better life, it is better to strive for a meaningful existence. Your kindness to others is like a piece of candy, gone once eaten; your meanness, however, is like a scar, potentially permanent. Control your emotions; do not let emotions control you. Do not become an emotional person whose mood swings wildly at the mere words of others. Do not reveal everything in your heart. This is your privacy and also your wealth, whether good or bad. Life is like flowers blooming and wilting, tides rising and falling. There are gains and losses, sorrows and joys. The unluckiest person is the one who always believes they have lost too much and is tormented by this notion. Adjust your mindset like a ship adjusting its sails; only with the right mindset can happiness appreciate in value. In life, the problem itself is never the issue; how you deal with it is the real problem.
心房若保持干净整洁，住进来的人才会感到舒适。大人或许会因起风而烦恼，担心头发被吹乱或天气变冷；而孩子却因风而快乐，看着手中的小风车转动，又可以去放风筝了。不要做无聊的人，不要在生气时做任何决定，也不要吃对身体有害的食物。如果我不那么要强，一定会告诉所有关心我的人，我太累了。与其说是为了更好的生活，不如说是为了活得有意义。你的好对别人来说像一颗糖，吃了就没了；你的坏对别人来说却像疤痕，可能永久存在。要控制情绪，不要让情绪控制自己，不要成为情绪化的人，以至于别人的三言两语就能让你悲喜无常。不要把心底的话全掏出来，这属于你的隐私，也是你的财富，无论好坏。人生如花开花谢，潮起潮落，有得便有失，有苦也有乐。如果谁总自以为失去的太多，总受到这个意念的折磨，谁才是最不幸的人。调整你的心态，如同轮船调整船帆一样，心态正确了，才能给快乐升值。人生，问题本身都不是问题，如何对待它才是最大的问题。